Peer Review

On the 21-04-16 I had my rescheduled Peer Review session because I had missed the first one.
I was partnered up with Kane Layland  who looked at my work and judged what I had done well and what I needed to improve on for each Learning Outcome.

LO5: Demonstrate knowledge of the fundamental techniques, materials and processes associated with your subject.
Improvements: 

• annotate contact sheet 
• try editing styles like the photographers you've searched to help show understanding 
• add something to show process and technical knowledge

Strengths:

• You've used a variety of shooting formats:- i.e. played with landscape and fashion photography.
• using different formats of photography (suggested to stear away from phone photography
• Liked the use of layout in narrative book 

LO6: Make judgements and present arguments through engagement with fundamental historical, cultural and ethical concepts and theories associated with your subject.
Improvements:

• focus more on artists style and what you got from the work rather than their back story
• annotate work/ images 

Strengths:

• good amount of artist research looking into different styles and types of artists.
• putting older shooting styles into current day

LO7: Demonstrate a range of approaches to creative and experimental problem solving. 

Improvements: 

• talk about what went well and what didn't in evaluation- discuss how you overcame the problems adopted

Strengths:

• Good evaluation of phone shoot on way to uni 

LO8: communicate the development of you ideas clearly using text, image or object.
Improvements: 

• Talk more about plans for shoots and how to improve in future shoots- re-shoot if necessary to show progression 
• play around with editing techniques more

Strengths:

• after changing ideas for narrative you have a lot clearer views of what you are doing, showing clearer development
• can see a clear development throughout work 

LO9: Demonstrate fundamental subject - specific and transferable skills relevant to your practice and future career. 
Improvements: 

• perhaps put group work such as PowerPoints into your logbook 

Strengths:

• good self evaluation of group crits
• sowing definite transferable skills in public speaking etc. 
• good work in workshops- working with others
• traveling for models and prepping for shoots is good  (maybe say how ouu found model)

LO10: Evidence independent planning and time-management in the development of your work. 
Improvements: 

• as you went into areas such as cambridge talk in advance about planning what you are bringing and times etc

strengths: 

• reshoot of holding images is done alot better - can see big improvement 

overall I think this Peer Review helped a lot, as I found out exactly what i needed to do inmy work to improve