peer review

L/O 1- 

What has been done well?:-

• Good development of ideas (especially still life) 
• good range of artists 

what do you think needs to be done:- 

• focus on perfecting style and creating a final image

L/O 2- 

what has been done well? :-

• good amount of detailed research to inform your shoot

what do you think needs to be done?:-

• look at your work in terms of professional contexts 

L/O 3-

What had been done well?:- 

• annotation of shoots are clear

what do you think needs to be done?:- 

• start to work on visual coherence 

L/O 4- 

What has been done well:-

• critical analysis of your own work 

what needs to be done?:-

• When referring to an artist your images need to be visually coherent, show that you have taken inspiration from them.

L/O 5

what has been done well?:-

• good use of lighting diagrams from your shoots 
• good annotation and communication through your logbook 

what needs to be done?:- 

• look at landscape photographers 
• take inspiration from others- not just flower photography 
• discuss your landscape shoot and what inspired it 

L/O 6- 

what has been done well?:- 

• every shoot has a plan, even including health and safety 

what needs to be done?:- 

• consider your visual approach for your three types of images-keep it coherent